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06 Mar 2026, 18:35

Kostas's Shop EN

0 min 32 sec
Your final score
Poor
The WHAT
The HOW
What is great
While your overall performance was a struggle, your 'The How' score of 50% indicates that you maintain a decent baseline of social etiquette. You didn't come across as aggressive or confrontational, which is a vital starting point. Specifically, your response to being corrected on the owner's name was a step in the right direction; by saying «Oh, I'm sorry» and immediately pivoting to the business at hand, you demonstrated a level of coherence and conversational logic. This ability to acknowledge a mistake without stalling the dialogue kept the door open, even if it was only slightly, for the business discussion to continue.
What to improve
To succeed at an elite level, you must replace your aimless approach with professional intentionality. Using the wrong name and describing your visit as «just walking around» or something that «came to my mind» destroyed your credibility instantly. Kostas viewed you as a distraction rather than a partner. You used the word «just» four times in one sequence, which signals a lack of confidence and minimizes your authority. Moving forward, you must verify the client’s name beforehand and lead with a concrete, value-driven objective. Instead of sounding accidental, tell the owner exactly why your presence will help his bottom line.
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Key situation 1

Context: Initial Greeting and Introduction

Actions: You opened the conversation by misidentifying the shop owner as "Kolibera" instead of Kostas and used a very generic greeting: "How are you feeling today?". While you mentioned JTI, you failed to state your specific professional position or the reason for your visit.

Impact: This immediately created social friction. Kostas's mood reflected a high level of sadness (0.4) and a "slight frown," as he had to correct you. His embodied reaction of "deliberate slowness" suggests he felt you were an unprepared stranger rather than a professional partner, causing him to offer only an "unenthusiastic nod."

Key situation 2

Context: Stating the Purpose of the Visit

Actions: After the name error, you explained your presence by saying you were "just walking around" and it "came to my mind" to check the stock. You asked for permission to inspect the shop using very casual phrasing: "It's possible right now?".

Impact: This casual approach severely undermined your professional credibility. Kostas's trust plummeted from 0.43 to 0.26, and his anger rose to 0.25. His response—"let's do it properly rather than just hovering"—indicates he perceived your lack of a plan as a potential disruption to his customers, though he complied out of a desire for efficiency.

💡 How to improve?

  • Verify and use the correct name immediately to build rapport; for Kostas, a personal connection is the foundation of a business relationship.
  • Replace vague phrases like 'just walking around' with a clear professional objective, such as: 'I am here as your dedicated JTI representative to help you optimize your cigarette inventory and ensure your shelves are always stocked for your regulars.'
  • Explicitly state the 'What's In It For Me' (WIIFM) for the owner early on, for example: 'This check will only take 10 minutes and will help us identify any gaps that might be costing you sales.'
  • Always state your full professional title and the specific benefit of the meeting to avoid appearing like a casual visitor or a 'threat' to his time.
7 Cs Communication: Evaluation & Insights
Clear
How easy and straightforward it was to understand your message.
7 /10
Very good
Concise
How brief, focused, and to the point your communication was.
5 /10
Good
Concrete
The level of specificity, facts, and clarity in your statements.
4 /10
Fair
Correct
The accuracy and appropriateness of your tone and facts.
3 /10
Fair
Coherent
How logically connected and smooth your conversation flowed.
6 /10
Good
Complete
Whether you provided all necessary information for a decision.
5 /10
Good
Courteous
How polite, respectful, empathetic, and professional you were.
5 /10
Good

Analysis:
You were clear about your intent to «check the stock», but your reason for being there—«just walking around and came to my mind»—lacked professional clarity.

Impact on the character:
While Kostas understood the physical task you wanted to perform, the lack of a clear business reason made your presence feel like an unplanned intrusion during his busy delivery time.

How to improve:
Clearly state the professional purpose behind the check-in to provide context. Instead, say: «I am here to conduct a routine inventory audit to ensure you have enough JTI stock for the upcoming weekend.»

Analysis:
You used the word «just» four times in a single sentence: «just walking around», «just visit», «just check».

Impact on the character:
Excessive use of filler words makes you sound hesitant and diminishes your authority as a professional representative, potentially making the owner feel he can dismiss your request.

How to improve:
Remove redundant fillers to make your request sound more decisive. Try: «I’m here to review your stock levels. Would now be a good time to step into the storage area?»

Analysis:
You used vague phrasing like «came to my mind» and «walking around» rather than citing specific inventory needs or sales data.

Impact on the character:
The lack of concrete business drivers caused Kostas to react with a «slight frown» because your visit seemed arbitrary rather than a value-added service.

How to improve:
Replace abstract thoughts with concrete facts. Say: «I want to verify your current levels of our top three SKUs to ensure you don't experience a stock-out before the next delivery.»

Analysis:
You incorrectly addressed the shop owner as «Kolibera» when his name is Kostas, and your tone was overly casual for a professional cold visit.

Impact on the character:
Getting the client's name wrong immediately lowered his trust levels and made him feel like a generic stop on your route rather than a valued partner.

How to improve:
Verify the owner's name in your CRM or records before entering the premises. If you realize you made a mistake, offer a more sincere correction: «I apologize for the mistake, Kostas; thank you for correcting me.»

Analysis:
Your second message followed the flow of the conversation by acknowledging the name error with «Oh, I'm sorry» before pivoting to the request.

Impact on the character:
The transition was logical, though the shift from a personal apology to a business request was slightly abrupt given the owner's visible focus on his morning delivery.

How to improve:
Link your apology to your respect for his time to create a smoother transition. Say: «My apologies, Kostas. Since I see you are busy with deliveries, I'd like to quickly check the stock so I'm not in your way for long.»

Analysis:
You didn't explain how long the stock check would take or why it was necessary at that specific moment while he was «keeping an eye on the morning delivery».

Impact on the character:
Kostas felt the need to take control of the situation by leading you to the back so you wouldn't have «customers tripping over us», as you hadn't provided a plan for the interaction.

How to improve:
Include a time estimate and a benefit for the owner. Say: «I can perform a quick 5-minute audit of the pallets now so you won't have to worry about stock discrepancies later today.»

Analysis:
You apologized for the name error, but the phrase «I was just walking around» implies that his shop was just a convenient stop rather than a priority.

Impact on the character:
This lack of professional etiquette contributed to the owner's «unenthusiastic nod» and his feeling that your visit was a low-priority event.

How to improve:
Show more respect for the owner's time and business by framing your visit as a dedicated service. Say: «I apologize for the oversight, Kostas. I've made it a point to stop by today to support your inventory management.»

Stage-by-Stage Review
Section
The WHAT
The HOW
Intro

Kolibera, my name is Bartek and I am from JTI company. How are you feeling today?

It’s Kostas, actually. I'm doing alright, just keeping an eye on the morning delivery, but I don't think I was expecting anyone from JTI today.

*Kostas turns from arranging some newspapers on a stand, a slight frown creasing his brow as he takes in the stranger. He offers a brief, unenthusiastic nod before his gaze drifts back to the papers, his fingers continuing their work with a deliberate slowness.*

Oh, I'm sorry. I was just walking around and came to my mind that I should just visit your shop and just check the stock. It's possible right now?

Look, if you're going to check the stock, let's do it properly rather than just hovering out here in the aisles. Follow me into the back storage room; it’s easier to see what we actually have on the pallets without customers tripping over us.

*Kostas raises an eyebrow slightly, then nods slowly. He gestures towards the back of the shop.*

The user introduced themselves, stated their position, and mentioned the JTI company.
Introduce yourself
State your position
Say you are from JTI
Explain the purpose and the plan for the meeting
Explain the purpose of the meeting
Explain the benefit for Kostas
Mention the approximate duration of the meeting
Explain what Kostas gets out of this meeting
Ask for permission to inspect the storage room
The user politely asked for permission to conduct an inspection in the shop
What is great: You were polite in your introduction and demonstrated good emotional intelligence by immediately apologizing when you addressed the client by the wrong name.
What to improve: Your justification for the visit sounded accidental rather than professional, and you failed to state your specific job title or the benefits of the meeting for the client.
How to improve: Structure your opening by stating your position and providing a clear value proposition, such as: 'I am the Territory Manager at JTI, and I'm here to ensure your stock levels are optimized to prevent lost sales.'
Storage Room Inspection
Permission to ask questions
The user asked for permission to ask business questions
Ask business questions
Asks 1–2 logical open-ended questions
Summarize Kostas’s problems
Correctly summarized Kostas’s business problems based on the dialogue
Communication analysis isn’t available for this stage.
Propose Solutions
The importance of inventory
Gave a logical argument why it’s important to maintain sufficient stock levels
A clear solution describing benefits and mechanics
Described the benefits of solving the problem
Explained the mechanics of the solution
Explained the benefit of the proposed solution
Communication analysis isn’t available for this stage.
Close the Deal
Call to action
A relevant call to action (for example, placing an order)
Communication analysis isn’t available for this stage.